Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Raven's Gate

In Matt and Kelvins attempt to rob the wearhouse with all the new DVDs and CDs, Matt gets a bad fealing as a hand grabs him by the sholder. A well built security guard stood before him and Matt froze in fear. The guard was nothing like Kelvin had described. The guard questioned Matt but frozen in fear he couldnt speak. Suddenly The guards eyes and mouth oppened wide and as he fell foward Matt seen the hilt of Kelvins knife as his friend Kelvin stood there smileing. Matt wanted to ask him why? wanted to remind him of the promise he had made that the knife was just for breaking in. Kelvin said to Matt that they had to go but Matt stood froze in shock.

2 comments:

  1. I think your book sounds awesome!

    Are the 2 boys orphans?

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  2. The main character Matt is. His parents died in an automobile accident.

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